Triveni Journal
1927 | 11,233,916 words
Triveni is a journal dedicated to ancient Indian culture, history, philosophy, art, spirituality, music and all sorts of literature. Triveni was founded at Madras in 1927 and since that time various authors have donated their creativity in the form of articles, covering many aspects of public life....
Mahakavi Viswanadha Satyanarayana
One Original and Three Translations
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We publish below the original poem by Jnanapeetha awardee, Mahakavi Viswanadha Satyanarayana’s RATHAM (Telugu) and translations by three eminent writers of the same piece, which, we hope will be interesting. -
Editor
The Chariot Proudly bent on its course The car divinely bright stopped not a moment At early dawn, dread lord, they charioteer (Reprinted in the Platinum Jubilee Special issue of ‘Triveni’ – January, 2003) Your Chariottc
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"The Chariot
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(Translated from Telugu by Adivi Bapiraju
(From ‘Triveni’ 1928)
And cruel in its speed
The car was whirling on
My frail form was crushed into death
Beneath the chariot wheels.
And streams of blood gushed forth.
In hesitation that aught impeded its progress;
Nor did it veer round to note the sudden wail
That went up from my bruised heart.
Will wash the blood stains, from off they chariot wheels,
But, how from amongst the blood stains of millions
Will Thou spot out mine?
(Translated by B.V.L. Narayana Rao)
are galloping
at a steady
bewildering speed.
Swept up
and crushed
under the wheels
I lost
All my blood
Absorbed was the jolt
muffled the cry
by your
shining
glorious
chariot
Tomorrow
your charioteer
will clean the wheels
of my blood
Of all the blood smears there
how can one tell
which is
mine?
(Translated by Velcheru Narayana Rao,
Oxford University Press)
given to reckless speed, and my body
was crushed under it-blood gushed
out in rivulets.
Dazzling, luminous, your chariot
didn’t stop to see what this bump was.
Didn’t even look
Tomorrow your charioteer will clean
my blood off the wheels. But, lord,
from the millions of bloodstains
marking the wheels,
how will you know
which was mine?